This from James, a sophomore in my poetry class. It's his Author's Choice #3 selection, a haiku in need of a slight syllable adjustment in the last line but otherwise I think it's genius:
The snow is so white
I want to make a snowman
Then tackle his cold ass
Happy winter's day.
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This is my kind of kid.
lol, I bet he'll be president someday...
If you want to make things interesting, you could have him do a poem of the day on your porn of the day.
Just a thought!
Oh, Jenn. That makes me slightly uncomfortable on so many levels. If only you knew...
Mrs. G - He is definitely something; he got an easy 5 for Voice
Brandy - If so, he will need to be immediately forthcoming about certain leisure activities he participated in during HS...
brilliant.
Now *that* is a truly American haiku! :-) Excellent.
That was a great haiku - extra syllable or no.
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