I hate to harsh your mellow... the poem and the pic are really cool. Isn't the second line 8 syllables... fireworks is 3 syllables :(
I love the poem. Haiku or not.
I cherish having my mellow harshed by Anonymous readers...;DFor the nonexistent record, 'fire' is one of those cheat words that can be 1 or 2 syllables, as needed to fit a form.Or we can just pretend I wasn't attempting a haiku but simply a 3-line free form poem describing my photo.I appreciate the half-hearted props, regardless.Thanks for the unconditional love, Karen. :)
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